Scriptwriting Critique Form Your name: Arina Ross Author/Title Laban Massey Is the protagonist recognizable? What is his/her/its main objective? Is it reached? Not sure, my guess is the wizard. Is the conflict strong? Does it propel the action forward? Is it compelling? Are varied tactics employed? Still needs to develop some more Are the voices distinct? Does the dialogue fit the action/situation of the play? I think everyone had some distinction with them, sounded pretty good Is the climax identifiable? Is the tempo/pacing of the script appropriate and effective? No climax yet How is the backstory and/or foreshadowing? Is it used effectively? Got from the characters, could get more Additional comments: